Reworked Intro after helpful suggestions

Thanks again for the helpful comments and advice. I started this in a new post as i can't change the clip at the top of the old one and didn't want this buried down the bottom.
Old thread and clip here http://www.clanaod.net/forums/showthread.php?t=92162

Thanks to Tishka for his expert views (please no more, don't want to mess with it again lol)

Changes:

Yellow "orb" from top left of text deleted
Modified laser
Modified bullet holes and aligned better
Modified text and lighting for better vis
Modified background for more industrial/gloom/war look
Added environment partials
Added lighting effect for explosion
Added animation for text on explosion (instead of just disappearing!)
Added sound at start (timing was a pain)
Shorten whole sequence by around 42seconds


http://youtu.be/Yq9DhVvacKw

Looks good man !

I actually reworked my intro too to make it... A LOT more simpler lol...

link since it's unlisted :

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLCk...13LoYEnVfM24yA

No sound because I usually use the start the music over it... but yeah... super simple. :P

yeh man that is sweeeeeeeeeet, although i did like the original bullet holes but i see why you made them new, to keep "shooting into meet" effect through out? Apart from that, exactly what I wanted, WELL done.

On a side note: personally I would put a bit lighter text, but you are going for a grudge/goth effect so I let you off :P

P.S. Dawknight, that intro is simple, but hey it works, gets the point across.

Cheers guys, the "white" bullet holes stood out far to much and didn't go with the overall effect in the final render. Thought the black ones went well. To stick up for DawKnight if you've not seen his work, very talented, something i aspire to become in the youtube world. You should see his AOD Reavers vid when he's finished it. Its in early stages ATM but looks epic already!!

I like it, good job Mick. Wish I had that kind if skill with that stuff :P

Looks good!