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What do you think of my WIP Manga?
Howdy all!
I know there quite a few of you out there in the AOD community that like manga and anime as much as I do, so I wanted your opinion.
I've been working on this manga idea of mine with a friend named Serra for a while now.
It's about a teenage girl named Rukia, who gets murdered by a school shooter and reincarnated into the body of a rabbit in a fantasy world.
I attached a picture of what one of the panels, or in this case pages look like, and wanted your opinions.
Constructive critism is WELCOME! I need every detail, so don't be afraid to speak your mind.
Thanks!
Sincerely,
Jordan.
https://ibb.co/b41Mra
Last edited by Jman17774; 08-10-2017 at 08:50 PM.
Reason: Attaching Picture
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I like the story idea, looking forward to what the end result will look like. As for the panel, add more detail, I don't know what kind of style you're shooting for though, but defenitely a bit more shadowing.
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I thought mangas were book porn
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