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    I NEED REPAIRS......! AOD Member AOD_Mickgoth's Avatar
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    Omg Reworked Intro after helpful suggestions

    Thanks again for the helpful comments and advice. I started this in a new post as i can't change the clip at the top of the old one and didn't want this buried down the bottom.
    Old thread and clip here http://www.clanaod.net/forums/showthread.php?t=92162

    Thanks to Tishka for his expert views (please no more, don't want to mess with it again lol)

    Changes:

    Yellow "orb" from top left of text deleted
    Modified laser
    Modified bullet holes and aligned better
    Modified text and lighting for better vis
    Modified background for more industrial/gloom/war look
    Added environment partials
    Added lighting effect for explosion
    Added animation for text on explosion (instead of just disappearing!)
    Added sound at start (timing was a pain)
    Shorten whole sequence by around 42seconds




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    You are depriving some poor village of its idiot Dawknight's Avatar
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    Looks good man !

    I actually reworked my intro too to make it... A LOT more simpler lol...

    link since it's unlisted :

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLCk...13LoYEnVfM24yA

    No sound because I usually use the start the music over it... but yeah... super simple. :P

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    I'm your Father Luke.......Henry, Pedro, Sam, Jake, Dmitry AOD Member AOD_Tishka's Avatar
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    yeh man that is sweeeeeeeeeet, although i did like the original bullet holes but i see why you made them new, to keep "shooting into meet" effect through out? Apart from that, exactly what I wanted, WELL done.

    On a side note: personally I would put a bit lighter text, but you are going for a grudge/goth effect so I let you off :P

    P.S. Dawknight, that intro is simple, but hey it works, gets the point across.
    http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y200/tishka/sig_zps7edkimhf.jpg

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    I NEED REPAIRS......! AOD Member AOD_Mickgoth's Avatar
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    Cheers guys, the "white" bullet holes stood out far to much and didn't go with the overall effect in the final render. Thought the black ones went well. To stick up for DawKnight if you've not seen his work, very talented, something i aspire to become in the youtube world. You should see his AOD Reavers vid when he's finished it. Its in early stages ATM but looks epic already!!


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    Very funny Scotty, now beam down my clothes Shocklate's Avatar
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    I like it, good job Mick. Wish I had that kind if skill with that stuff :P

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    Don't shoot, I'm reloading AOD Member AOD_lanius424's Avatar
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    Looks good!
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